In My Ideal World Essay

Ideal World

A world without suffering.

A world without pain.

A world without guilt.

A world without war.

A world without hunger.

This would be my ideal world.

A world without greed.

A world without selfishness.

A world without fear.

A world without hate.

A world without strife.

This would be my ideal world.

A world without crime.

A world without tears.

A world without sorrow.

A world without disappointment.

A world without sickness.

A world without prejudice.

This would be my ideal world.

A world without jealousy.

A world without divorce.

A world without lust.

A world without poverty.

A world without unforgiveness.

This would be my ideal world.

A world without famine.

A world without drought.

A world without conflict.

A world without division.

A world without disasters.

This would be my ideal world.

A world with peace.

A world with love.

A world with joy.

A world with laughter.

A world with honesty.

A world with acceptance.

A world with forgiveness.

This would be my ideal world.

(Oh and one more thing. A world without taxes would be my ideal world!)
  1. 05-09-2004, 07:57 AM#1
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    My ideal world

    My ideal world

    My ideal world is a world that cares
    A world that accepts and a world that doesn’t stare

    A place that I can be just me
    A place for all and a place to be free

    Somewhere I can belong and fit in
    Somewhere I’m wanted and somewhere I don’t get tossed in the bin

    Full of people that I can love and be loved by
    People who don’t laugh and people that don’t make me cry

    A planet where everyone is treated the same
    A planet that doesn’t fight and a planet that has no shame

    Does my ideal world exist? The answer is unclear
    But one thing I know, it’s sure as hell not here

  2. 05-09-2004, 10:08 PM#2
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    Hi madrox

    Your words were very thought provoking and I wish there was such a place. Some people have a lot to answer for in the way that they treat others. I am sure many people could relate to your words.

    Take care.........Sue

  3. 05-10-2004, 03:12 AM#3
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    He thinks by infection, catching an opinion like a cold - John Ruskin.

    If I wanted to hear the beat of your heart, I'd rip it out and hold it to my ear.
    NIIIICK!!! I LOVE the last two lines, I'm glad to see you ended it in such a great way. It's awesome!

  4. 11-20-2005, 11:16 PM#4
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    my world

    my sweetest world is my home
    i return here after whwerever i roam
    i see glowing faces of my children
    which make me forgot my worries
    when my wife smiles to see us
    we feel flying in a heavenly bus

  5. 11-24-2005, 01:33 PM#5
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    hIghwAy 2 hELL
    My Home:
    is my HELL


    Nice poem Madrox.

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